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Lack of Desire.
Feb. 15th, 2006 04:43 pmOld fic of mine that ![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
imadra_blue wanted to rec on ![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-community.gif)
crack_van, and that I freaked out about because it, um, sucks and is really rough. Hence, the changes in this, though it's still not what it should be. Pacing is still off, characterization is still crappy, Obi-Wan is still the biggest emo baby ever, but alas, I cannot figure out how to make it better. *stupid*
The secondary title is still "Obi-Wan's Life Would Have Sucked So Much More if Qui-Gon Hadn't Died," though. XD
( Q/O, O/A, NC-17. Post-TPM AU. )
imadra_blue wanted to rec on crack_van, and that I freaked out about because it, um, sucks and is really rough. Hence, the changes in this, though it's still not what it should be. Pacing is still off, characterization is still crappy, Obi-Wan is still the biggest emo baby ever, but alas, I cannot figure out how to make it better. *stupid* The secondary title is still "Obi-Wan's Life Would Have Sucked So Much More if Qui-Gon Hadn't Died," though. XD
( Q/O, O/A, NC-17. Post-TPM AU. )
