Mostly typos here and there, an unclear pronoun during the first blowjob that HH gives Bush, and the ending -- it was not only lame, but I'd also used it before in another crack-AU that I wrote solely for the purpose of HH/WB porn. written. So I replaced it with a line from Crisis. Plagiarism >>> self-created retardation.
There's a really, really stupid sequel in progress. If you want to read it while it's being written, tell me, and I'll filter you in.
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Date: 2006-10-21 04:50 am (UTC)There's a really, really stupid sequel in progress. If you want to read it while it's being written, tell me, and I'll filter you in.