quigonejinn

These are all awesomeness. And it's really interesting seeing how you write -- I don't tend to use brackets but I do write with lines and phrases that I later have to work into something, like you have here. That's pretty much all I start with (and it's oftn the last line of the fic).

I want to give you more specific feedback on the RA piece because I think it's astounding nd wonderful, so I will go look at it again.