That was like a roller coaster of a fiction. Some parts had me completly wild, other parts caused me to look away in embarrassment, keep myself from laughing, and other parts i just found strange. I didn't know if I should be hot, or amused!
but it was well written, and there were some scenes I loved. Also, how it starts off profain, but the two work a nice banter into their relationship that I really enjoyed. I can completly imagine an AU where Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan are lying around just talking about erections and th like, just casual and every day.
Gods, he wanted his master to rim him. He'd never once conceived of Qui-Gon's mouth on someone else's arse before, and now he was lying there, waiting for it to happen to him. The realisation had him burying his head in the bedclothes once more, a hot wave of furious flushing tingeing his skin pink all over.
That was horrifyingly sexy. I have never thought about a man licking that bit and then gone, "gods...." but this did it for me XD
Actually, this is the first fic I've read that used sex as a a ritual for Jedi. that I don't like, it just seems really blasphemous and odd.. but despite how much I didn't like, theory wise, I can say I loved this story.
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Date: 2005-09-14 05:30 pm (UTC)but it was well written, and there were some scenes I loved. Also, how it starts off profain, but the two work a nice banter into their relationship that I really enjoyed. I can completly imagine an AU where Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan are lying around just talking about erections and th like, just casual and every day.
Gods, he wanted his master to rim him. He'd never once conceived of Qui-Gon's mouth on someone else's arse before, and now he was lying there, waiting for it to happen to him. The realisation had him burying his head in the bedclothes once more, a hot wave of furious flushing tingeing his skin pink all over.
That was horrifyingly sexy. I have never thought about a man licking that bit and then gone, "gods...." but this did it for me XD
Actually, this is the first fic I've read that used sex as a a ritual for Jedi. that I don't like, it just seems really blasphemous and odd.. but despite how much I didn't like, theory wise, I can say I loved this story.