I think that your Kennedy feels a lot more natural than anything I've written, and I like him better for it. I think I tend to get certain ideas about a character and try to show those rather than just showing the person, you know? Whereas I feel like you are showing us the person here. *sends fruit baskets to commodorified*
Re: 5 things about the Navy that Archie Kennedy never got used to.
Date: 2006-09-05 02:12 am (UTC)Now I will shut up, promise. :>