I am quite speechless here. I do not know this fandom at all, nor the canon, so I started reading with some distance in my head but was drawn in so quickly that I was surprised. There is phenomenal command of prose here, and of pace, and of dialogue. I loved the repetitions, and the details, and the very, very sexiness of it.
Two typos: 'occaisioned' appears twice; and 'he had not want Bush'.
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Date: 2009-06-09 08:10 pm (UTC)I am quite speechless here. I do not know this fandom at all, nor the canon, so I started reading with some distance in my head but was drawn in so quickly that I was surprised. There is phenomenal command of prose here, and of pace, and of dialogue. I loved the repetitions, and the details, and the very, very sexiness of it.
Two typos: 'occaisioned' appears twice; and 'he had not want Bush'.
Brilliant. Thank you.