YOU MUST WRITE MORE ARCHIE PLEASE. Oh, yes. I really love the different things you've done here. I just had a sudden thought that maybe one of the big things about Archie is that he doesn't trust himself. And I think that actually comes through in some of these bits of fic.
You would dream of the sea; you would dream of freedom. Carriage lights passing over cobblestone streets looked like water.
That's beautiful.
The sound of Horatio saying Archie, over and over, with his heart in every syllable, and the feeling of the rest of the world -- Sawyer, ship, memories of the Spanish prison, lingering ghosts of Simpson everything, absolutely everything -- dropping away.
And that. *____*
Rest is wonderful and sad.
Also, Qui-Gon noticing the attractiveness of his young Padawan is lovely, and strange, because he probably shouldn't, but he's a bit powerless in *noticing*. And that's a really interesting thought.
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hooray for fic dumps
Date: 2006-02-09 11:27 pm (UTC)You would dream of the sea; you would dream of freedom. Carriage lights passing over cobblestone streets looked like water.
That's beautiful.
The sound of Horatio saying Archie, over and over, with his heart in every syllable, and the feeling of the rest of the world -- Sawyer, ship, memories of the Spanish prison, lingering ghosts of Simpson everything, absolutely everything -- dropping away.
And that. *____*
Rest is wonderful and sad.
Also, Qui-Gon noticing the attractiveness of his young Padawan is lovely, and strange, because he probably shouldn't, but he's a bit powerless in *noticing*. And that's a really interesting thought.