Oh, wow. So humbling. Woman, you give me a complex. You had some typos, and one of those sentences was incomprehensible to my teensy brain for the first three reads (#12), but guh. So many of your usual little details, delightful injection of real character, story, sci fi, humor, and touching sorrow. I think I'm too tired to give you feedback that's worth anything, but I really, really liked this. ♥
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branchandroot
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Date: 2006-02-01 10:38 am (UTC)