Oh, gorgeous. Just a lovely little piece, full of science fiction-y detail, and beautiful detail and insight on Anakin. I really, really like this. The last sentence got me, too. Just sad and haunting. Memorable, which is why I like your stuff. It always sticks out in my mind. It's not run of the mill. It's unique. :D
Couple spelling errors here and there, if you care about such things, and I would have loved the back end to be expanded. It kind of melded from Obi-Wan to Vader, and you did the shift nicely, but you know me. I'm a greedy bitch, always wanting more. ;)
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Date: 2005-12-17 11:16 pm (UTC)Couple spelling errors here and there, if you care about such things, and I would have loved the back end to be expanded. It kind of melded from Obi-Wan to Vader, and you did the shift nicely, but you know me. I'm a greedy bitch, always wanting more. ;)