As an exercise for Anakin, as a sort of useful punishment for his lack of focus
Heeee. XD
I do think the second to last paragraph needs a bit more filling out, it's a little too understated. There's some contradictions I had difficulty getting over, like how why he's sculpting himself at 21 when the experience was when he's 14, and why it was worse if it was a triumph that Obi-Wan wasn't there.
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Date: 2005-12-17 02:01 pm (UTC)As an exercise for Anakin, as a sort of useful punishment for his lack of focus
Heeee. XD
I do think the second to last paragraph needs a bit more filling out, it's a little too understated. There's some contradictions I had difficulty getting over, like how why he's sculpting himself at 21 when the experience was when he's 14, and why it was worse if it was a triumph that Obi-Wan wasn't there.