I can't BEAT THAT. AT ALL. I start and I just scroll back up and stare at "You shouldn't want things this badly, Tony." shrivel up and DIE.
I'd end it with a knock on the hotel door and Howard and Maria Stark with a teddy bear and a constructor set under each arm, going "We loved you so much, we came back from the dead! We brought ice cream!"
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Date: 2008-06-26 03:17 am (UTC)I'd end it with a knock on the hotel door and Howard and Maria Stark with a teddy bear and a constructor set under each arm, going "We loved you so much, we came back from the dead! We brought ice cream!"