I'd like to add to my keysmashing above and say that your gorgeous piece is just... guh. Everything I love about Anakin/Obi-Wan, you manage to capture in so few words. The shifts in time, lovely crytal metaphor, and the way you phrased the story, as though Obi-Wan was writing it in third person, trying to justify it, is gorgeous. And the bits of humor and gentle beauty flow wonderfully together. And clearly, what little eloquence I possess has preceded me to bed.
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I'd like to add to my keysmashing above and say that your gorgeous piece is just... guh. Everything I love about Anakin/Obi-Wan, you manage to capture in so few words. The shifts in time, lovely crytal metaphor, and the way you phrased the story, as though Obi-Wan was writing it in third person, trying to justify it, is gorgeous. And the bits of humor and gentle beauty flow wonderfully together. And clearly, what little eloquence I possess has preceded me to bed.
♥