This is very nice, with some lovely imagery. I especially liked,
'The curtains of the library were thick and possibly even velvet given how Pellew liked to spend money, but Edrington saw the white of the horse's eye, flashing around, the same color as the light on the sea.'
And that last paragraph... whoa, total kick in the gut, but so wonderful.
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Date: 2007-10-24 12:40 pm (UTC)'The curtains of the library were thick and possibly even velvet given how Pellew liked to spend money, but Edrington saw the white of the horse's eye, flashing around, the same color as the light on the sea.'
And that last paragraph... whoa, total kick in the gut, but so wonderful.