I read your fic couple of minutes ago. It is interesting crossover and you are better writer than JKR, very fluently and inspiring. Do you know David Edding's world, Elenium/Tamuli. It would be surprising crossover fic, in my opinion. Sparhawk/Kalten/Horatio/Bush/Archie/Bevier.... well, I thought Bevier and Bush would be amazing. Bevier is a complete firm, unbelievably handsome knight with high rules, he rejects any physical contacts because of his religious directions. Perhaps he needs Bush:)))
I wish I would write about it but English is not my first language so I still try to develop my writing skills.