ext_18271 ([identity profile] randomalia.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] quigonejinn 2006-07-23 01:24 am (UTC)

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I love this so much, and it is so full and graceful and gorgeous that I don't know where to start. All these different pieces and people and you bring them together to give Jack a story and nnggh.

My favourite bits:
and you could see the shape of your name on his lips, but you did not hear it because he was so breathless from fucking you.

And the Cotard bits (drunken turtle ahaha love), and the last three paragraphs, which are beautiful.

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