That part got me too. I mean, I'm usually a fan of well-written rimming to begin with but OMG. Yes. The notion of Qui-God ifjkjgdfad my brain is melting just thinking about it again, and then Obi-Wan's reaction, and the sex in that is, aside from a misplaced word here and there and the constant WEEPING COCKS, really insanely hot.

And you're right. It swerves all over the place on the meter for me. Sometimes, heartbreaking, sometimes insanely hot, sometimes hysterically funny, both intentionally and unintentinonally. Fun times. XD