The hair-brushing sold me, omfg. I loved it hard; and ... I guess the eventual sex scene has varying degrees of believability for people. I personally found it a nice balance between stories where Xanatos just out-and-out rapes him, and those where Obi-Wan just randomly turns to the Dark Side because Qui-Gon is omgsomean. Those ones kind of make me roll my eyes, really. Keelywolfe's are guilty pleasures stories for me, I guess - the hair-brushing and Obi-Wan pretending to be a prostitute in the sequel and all that. :>