I think this might work better (I might for example believe the two look alike) if the photos between scenes would actually come up as something other than itty bitty boxes with red Xs in them. *Sigh* Hmmm. Well. It's still a lovely piece and actually I do think it's about family and politics and the Jedi and their damned insistence on neutrality unless ordered otherwise by the leaders of the Republic that tends to screw over the very people they should be most protecting more often than not, so I'm glad you wrote/posted it.