of course i had to overlook the recent crack_van's postings and come to this story only after your comments on my LJ, and then it all comes as a flashback, and here i am, sitting, reading and gaping and thinking 'wait, i remember the story's name, is it the same author that...' O_O uh. give DT a few days, and she'll put two and two together.

loved the span of the story, how it passed through all the stages of their lives as if through some transparent material. loved it that, for once, HH and WB don't only consider each other as some remote hypothetic possibility, but actually get down to do some active stuff...and agin, for once it's HH getting buggered. indeed, it's not only Forester but also some overly stereotyped fans who are spinning now :D

and this is perhaps my fave bit: this was how one started to have sex with Bush. By touching some part of his uniform. That this was how one courted William Bush. - an observation that is very minute and very true.