Bloody HELL, dude. Good fucking god. I think you melted my brain. You are, I swear, the only person who can do that to me with Qui-Gon. But mostly, of course, you're doing it with Obi-Wan, who's just... nnnghkajsdlkfjliusdlfj! So frank, so intense, so restrained, so desperate, so stoic, so reasoned. All of it, bundled up tight and twisted.

And even with all the nnnghk, best is the passage where Qui-Gon's spine is shattered. Obi-Wan coming apart and holding together. Such desperation it's almost wild and still so measured... and, y'know, just faaaaaaark, man.

Solid gold.