Ohhh how much I love this. The way you say such important things indirectly, tell us about events through their impact on the characters, and give these little glimpses of the feelings they have.
I started quoting all the bits that I adored and then it was kind of everything, so I'm restraining myself. Obi-Wan's preoccupation with Qui-Gon's queue (and Qui-Gon's queue itself <3), and the way Qui-Gon fusses without Obi-Wan really knowing about it, and the change through happiness, through love duality. Gorgeous.
I don't think your Obi-Wan speaking voice is off. TPM!Obi is hard to pin down because we don't get much in the way of non-mission talk from him. Nothing extended, anyway. This felt true to Obi-Wan for me, in any case. It felt right for both characters.
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I started quoting all the bits that I adored and then it was kind of everything, so I'm restraining myself. Obi-Wan's preoccupation with Qui-Gon's queue (and Qui-Gon's queue itself <3), and the way Qui-Gon fusses without Obi-Wan really knowing about it, and the change through happiness, through love duality. Gorgeous.
I don't think your Obi-Wan speaking voice is off. TPM!Obi is hard to pin down because we don't get much in the way of non-mission talk from him. Nothing extended, anyway. This felt true to Obi-Wan for me, in any case. It felt right for both characters.