http://arthurh3535.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] arthurh3535.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] quigonejinn 2010-01-29 09:26 pm (UTC)

A little less stream of consciousness and this could be a totally amazing full story. Just jumps around a bit too much though.
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