ext_3084 ([identity profile] the-wanlorn.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] quigonejinn 2008-09-23 06:04 am (UTC)

Oh, hey, there's a shitton of little mistakes like that - lots of little words left out - that I attributed to ~stylistic choice~ since, I mean, the structure is so fragmented and broken that it sort of made sense for the sentences themselves to be broken and missing shit.

UM BUT AS I WAS SAYING BEFORE I TRIED TO JUSTIFY WHY I DON'T HAVE A MENTAL LIST OF WHERE THE MISSING WORDS ARE... They exist (or, well, don't exist, which is the problem) and if you care enough (WHICH I SAY BECAUSE I WOULD TOTALLY GO "WHATEVER, IT'S STILL UNDERSTANDABLE, I DON'T CARE") you might wanna beat one of your friends into finding those places.

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