Oh, hey, there's a shitton of little mistakes like that - lots of little words left out - that I attributed to ~stylistic choice~ since, I mean, the structure is so fragmented and broken that it sort of made sense for the sentences themselves to be broken and missing shit.

UM BUT AS I WAS SAYING BEFORE I TRIED TO JUSTIFY WHY I DON'T HAVE A MENTAL LIST OF WHERE THE MISSING WORDS ARE... They exist (or, well, don't exist, which is the problem) and if you care enough (WHICH I SAY BECAUSE I WOULD TOTALLY GO "WHATEVER, IT'S STILL UNDERSTANDABLE, I DON'T CARE") you might wanna beat one of your friends into finding those places.