Obadiah puts his arm over her. Tony closes her eyes for a brief moment and tilts her chin up again, and then, quite deliberately puts
They watch the girls on stage...
Puts? Puts WHAT? (And shouldn't that be a black business suit rather than a lack business suit?)
Little nitpicks aside, I howled with laughter, awwwwwed in sympathy, and had more than a few "oh shit!" moments. I so love the way you write; you can evoke emotion and imagery with such economy and eloquence of phrase. : )
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They watch the girls on stage...
Puts? Puts WHAT? (And shouldn't that be a black business suit rather than a lack business suit?)
Little nitpicks aside, I howled with laughter, awwwwwed in sympathy, and had more than a few "oh shit!" moments. I so love the way you write; you can evoke emotion and imagery with such economy and eloquence of phrase. : )
On to part 2!