ok, that's just horrifying! it makes the piece i'm working on for the RDJ Kink Meme look like a day in the park with the Teletubbies.
""Shh," he says and grips her by the jaw and slides forward. Not too deep, but not so shallow that he doesn't smile -- her eyes are still fixed on his face."
don't mind me; i'm just gonna go and pour some extra-strength Liquid Drano in my ear now.
seriously, it was fascinating. myself, i might have reduced the number of sections, grouped some of them together to make it read a little more smoothly, but i love the reverse-chronology device.
Eeeww! That's so wrong!!!
""Shh," he says and grips her by the jaw and slides forward. Not too deep, but not so shallow that he doesn't smile -- her eyes are still fixed on his face."
don't mind me; i'm just gonna go and pour some extra-strength Liquid Drano in my ear now.
seriously, it was fascinating. myself, i might have reduced the number of sections, grouped some of them together to make it read a little more smoothly, but i love the reverse-chronology device.