So, with that introduction, I kind of had to read this. And that was before I knew it had a wacky timeline. WITH NUMBERS. NUMBERS!
It took about three times reading it for my poor sleep-deprived brain (which only half remembers canon) to understand wtf was going on, but it was awesome prior to knowing and awesomer after, so it worked out. You have such a talent for lines that pack a punch that I feel a little bruised by the end. Also, I feel kind of bad about how much more interesting than everyone else I find Obadiah.
(I feel very out of place, commenting to your fic among your Iron Man legion.)
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It took about three times reading it for my poor sleep-deprived brain (which only half remembers canon) to understand wtf was going on, but it was awesome prior to knowing and awesomer after, so it worked out. You have such a talent for lines that pack a punch that I feel a little bruised by the end. Also, I feel kind of bad about how much more interesting than everyone else I find Obadiah.
(I feel very out of place, commenting to your fic among your Iron Man legion.)