OK. So, I normally read stories on the sly and not leave comments because I'm terrible like that, but I could not not comment on this: It's so dark, with such a painful twist to it. The writing itself is so so so crisp, and I love the use of the second-person perspective. And this section:

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The money is addictive, and the sex is pretty close to incredible.

Still, you tell yourself, it's going to stop eventually.

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The money is addictive, and the sex is pretty close to incredible, but you know it has to stop sometime.

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Here's how it stops:

followed by the result, and then the reveal. Great pacing.