ext_72244 ([identity profile] millari.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] quigonejinn 2008-07-27 12:18 am (UTC)

Here on a rec from [livejournal.com profile] montana_crows. This was the first thing I picked out to read, because I couldn't help falling for Bond, Wayne, and Stark in a room together.

It was hysterical and even a little creepy in places, what with the glass in Bond's arm that no one brings up and Obadiah's barely-suppressed rage. I didn't expect to enjoy Bruce as much as I did, but really, in any crack, it's the smart, snarky, slightly humorousless observer who drives so much of the humor. You played him perfectly in that role.

Incidentally, I loved how you tied Obadiah's anger about the cufflinks to the very last line of the fic. Not only did the unexpected injection of icewater in the veins really work, the implied comparison between Tony and Alexander is a cool one.

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